Score: 10

"woo"

submission: F E A R

date: July 5, 2009

That was REALLY good. I found myself very engrossed in the story. It keeps you on the edge of your seat. Great job!

Score: 6

"hmm"

submission: T.I.N (pre)

date: July 5, 2009

I actually found where the story seemed to be going very interesting. However, it was lacking in content. Probably add a bit more as to how the scenario began, and give some more closure to the story rather than leaving it to the viewers imagination.
The artwork also looks promising, but needs to be refined a bit. It's a little too sloppy in certain parts. Either way you added "pre" to the title so I'm assuming this isn't the full movie? While it's a good way to get feedback, it is sometimes not a good idea to put unfinished work up. It's better to put the full thing up and use the feedback in future projects rather than trying to perfect your first one. Also try to add just a little bit of animation to live it up.
All in all it's decent looking and the music is pretty good for the scenario presented. Keep up the good work.

Score: 10

"Stick art is great"

submission: Jombilation

date: July 2, 2009

I don't know why people give stick art such a hard time. Some of the greatest videos here on NG involve stick animation, and I'd say this is a really good video. Mad props man. Keep it up!